Year 4 writers
Year 4 writer: Eliza B (2011)
My secret place is in my back yard in a massive hedge. It is really secret because I like to read in it and if everyone came in it my book-reading would be disturbed! Sometimes I let my annoying sister in but she never remembers which part of the hedge it is in.
I am still decorating it in there so it won't be just a brick wall at the back and green wet leaves at the front of the hedge.My den hasn't got any floor, just wet rough soil, but in the summer I sometimes put a rug or ground-sheet down for a day.
When I go to my special place I read and sometimes just think. Sometimes I watch the birds because my secret place has lots of gaps between the leaves. It is also a fantastic place for a game of hide and seek.
Year 4 writer: Ellen R (1995)
No Another Cliffhanger!!!
'The Archers'
Does one.
After the exciting bit
It's gone (tut)
"I've got to listen tomorrow," says Dad,
Just before the end
It stops!!
Miss reads a story,
I like it a lot
We go on adventures.
exciting, scary .....
Then guess what?
She stops .....
'Til tomorrow,
Another cliffhanger .... oh, rats!!
As soon as you're on the edge of your seat
and your blood pressure is rising
you're going red, all tensed up .....
..... to be continued.
My secret place is in my back yard in a massive hedge. It is really secret because I like to read in it and if everyone came in it my book-reading would be disturbed! Sometimes I let my annoying sister in but she never remembers which part of the hedge it is in.
I am still decorating it in there so it won't be just a brick wall at the back and green wet leaves at the front of the hedge.My den hasn't got any floor, just wet rough soil, but in the summer I sometimes put a rug or ground-sheet down for a day.
When I go to my special place I read and sometimes just think. Sometimes I watch the birds because my secret place has lots of gaps between the leaves. It is also a fantastic place for a game of hide and seek.
Year 4 writer: Ellen R (1995)
No Another Cliffhanger!!!
'The Archers'
Does one.
After the exciting bit
It's gone (tut)
"I've got to listen tomorrow," says Dad,
Just before the end
It stops!!
Miss reads a story,
I like it a lot
We go on adventures.
exciting, scary .....
Then guess what?
She stops .....
'Til tomorrow,
Another cliffhanger .... oh, rats!!
As soon as you're on the edge of your seat
and your blood pressure is rising
you're going red, all tensed up .....
..... to be continued.